
This is a poem i wrote when i felt very lonely in my class room . i am here the desert traveler in the poem and mentioned the rain drops as the friends.........
Walking through miles ,moving along a very long way
Tiring through the dry desert not even a single bay.
Moving through out the life alone holding the hands with air
This traveler with no one in this world worth for him to care.
I do not know when the journey started.
I do not know when it would end.
Although many people in my life departed
still i travel with a hope to meet a friend.
At times trespassers crosses me without even a smile
as they had their own joys in their miles.
There were cactus spread in pair
but my oasis of mind had no one to share.
I wander along just for a trusted hold
but loneliness never let me move out of its fold.
As crying throughout made my eyes dry as desert
I am still unaware why i had chosen this desert.
Once a sole drop landed on my cheeks from the vast sky
and accompanied me for few miles for a try
I cared it,loved it even begged it to stay along
later i could understand that ,for me it did not belong.
With loads of worries and confusion in my mind
I was fighting to get back my drops from the wind
striking my mind for the reason why it had left
as i should have encapsulated it without a slept.
Might be the drop would not deserve my love
or that the wind had more love to the drop than to the dove
or is that i am not a suitable man for anyone
or should i still travel alone to search someone.
Still not stopping my steps raising my head
as i hope for another drop in my miles ahead
which i would never let it go
and take it till my grave .................
I think you cant consider it as a poem as it lacks many poetic device i just used little alteration and rhyming words and metaphor still i am very sure yo can feel the poem and can understand what i want to convey...
y feeling so much?
ReplyDeletethere is a feel as there is a cause for the fell ..........
ReplyDeleteGood One Appu! Appreciate your articulation style ... Keep it up ;)
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